Real Communication An Introduction

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370 Part 4  Public Speaking

of coordinating subpoints, each carrying equal weight, as well as sub-subpoints
that carry less weight. The resulting structure reflects a pyramidlike hierarchy
of ideas: a foundation of many sub-subpoints supports a structure of fewer but
larger subpoints, which in turn supports a few main points, which together
support the thesis statement and ultimately your specific purpose. This struc-
tural hierarchy of points, depicted in Figure 13.1, ensures that you’ve presented
a coherent and sturdy argument in support of your thesis and specific purpose.
Later in the chapter, we’ll show you how to use an outline to detail this hierar-
chy of points in a text format, but next we’ll consider helpful ways to arrange
your points.

Arranging Your Points
Think about creating a Facebook photo album of your recent trip to Europe.
How would you arrange all of your pictures? You could work chronologically,
simply uploading individual photos to one album in the order in which they
were taken. Alternatively, you might arrange them by topic with separate albums
for specific cities or countries visited or by types of activities (like one album for
historical sites visited and another album for silly photos with friends).
You have similar options when preparing a speech. During the process of
sorting out your main points and subpoints, you are taking the initial step of
arranging your ideas in some sequence. Here are some common arrangements,
or patterns, to consider.

Chronological Pattern
Often it makes sense to organize your points according to time: what happened
first, second, and so on. A chronological pattern presents the main points
of a message forward (or backward) in a systematic, time-related fashion. For
example, you might use a chronological presentation when speaking about
the development of Picasso’s style over the course of his life. A chronological

THESIS STATEMENT

Main Point 1

Subpoint 1 Subpoint 2 Subpoint 3

Sub-subpoints

FIGURE 13.1
HIERARCHY OF
POINTSNote how many
sub-subpoints support a
smaller number of subpoints.
Each subpoint supports the
main point. And the main
point supports your thesis.

Organizing your main points
and subpoints for a speech
may seem overwhelming,
but you’ve likely done this
type of work before. Good,
clear writing—whether
an academic paper or an
important letter—requires
similar organization. Think of
a particular piece of writing
you were nervous about—a
term paper or a private mes-
sage to a potential romantic
partner. What was the pur-
pose of your writing? How
did you go about organizing
your main points?

AND YOU?

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