5 Steps to a 5 AP English Language 2019

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And that, really, is all. Unless you include, as one must, the Holcomb School, a good-looking establish-

ment, which reveals a circumstance that the appearance of the community otherwise camouf lages: that the

parents who send their children to this modern and ably staffed “consolidated” school—the grades go from

kindergarten through senior high, and a fleet of buses transport the students, of which there are usually

around three hundred and sixty, from as far as sixteen miles away—are, in general, a prosperous people....

The farm ranchers in Finney County, of which Holcomb is a part, have done well; money has been made

not from farming alone but also from the exploitation of plentiful natural-gas resources, and its acquisition is

reflected in the new school, the comfortable interiors of the farmhouses, the steep and swollen grain elevators.

Until one morning in mid-November of 1959, few Americans—in fact, few Kansans—had ever heard of

Holcomb. Like the waters of the river, like the motorists on the highway, and like the yellow trains streaking

down the Sante Fe tracks, drama in the shape of exceptional happenings, had never stopped there. The

inhabitants of the village, numbering two hundred and seventy, were satisfied that this should be so,

quite content to exist inside ordinary life...

Developing the Opening Paragraph

After you have marked your passage, review the prompt. Now, choose the elements you

are able to identify and analyze those that support Capote’s view. To demonstrate, we have

chosen structure, tone, and selection of detail.

Now, it’s time to write. Your opening statement is the one that catches the eye of the

reader and sets the expectation and tone of your essay. Spend time on your first paragraph

to maximize your score. A suggested approach is to relate a direct reference from the pas-

sage to the topic. Make certain that the topic is very clear to the reader. This re inforces the

idea that you fully understand what is expected of you and what you will communicate to

the reader. As always, identify both the text and its author in this first paragraph.

Now, you try it. Write your own first paragraph for this prompt. Write quickly, refer-

ring to your notes. Let’s check what you’ve written:

• Have you included author, title?


• Have you addressed “Capote’s view of Holcomb”?


• Have you specifically mentioned the elements you will refer to in your essay?
  Here are four sample opening paragraphs that address each of the above criteria:

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In the opening of In Cold Blood, Truman Capote presents a picture of the town of

Holcomb, Kansas. Through structure, selection of detail, and a detached tone, he makes

it clear that he views Holcomb as dull and ordinary.

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