116 English Grammar Demystifi ed
Incorrect: I ordered: potatoes, sugar, fl our, eggs, and coffee.
Also, if the information that comes after the colon is a complete sentence (as in
the fi rst example for Rule 2), use a capital letter, as you would normally do in the
beginning of a sentence.
Look at another example:
Children will take up activities if you supply some good ideas for play: Color
and paint in an art center that you create, cut up used holiday cards and paste
them as stickers, choose a costume from a costume box and create a play or
dance routine.
NOTE: In the preceding sentence, the words before the colon could stand alone as
a sentence. What would happen if you added the words which are after good ideas
for play?
Children will take up activities if you supply some good ideas for play which
are: color and paint in an art center that you create, cut up used holiday cards
to paste as stickers, choose a costume from a costume box and create a play
or dance routine.
You now see a common colon error. To avoid it, do not use a verb before the
colon—in this case the verb is the word are.
Written Practice 5-8
Correct the colon errors in the following sentences.
- Expect to do the following as a part of your job open the offi ce at 8:30 A.M.,
take messages from the answering machine, and distribute the mail. - Find these fi les before you leave Premium Plumbers, Apex Offi ce Furniture,
and ABC Business Management. - The board members’ places at the table were covered with these pages of
information, an agenda for the meeting, a schedule of meetings for the year,
and the bylaws.