204 English Grammar Demystifi ed
- Before you offer your opinion, at least get the true facts.
- We’re looking for a new retail facility.
Correcting Illogical Statements
Check the logic of the following sentence:
Most of the days of our vacation were cloudy, but we went boating or
swimming.Logic would dictate that you went swimming despite the clouds! How can you say
that?
Most of the days of our vacation were cloudy; yet, we went boating or
swimming.Written Practice 9-13
In each of the following sentences, look for unnecessary words and illogical
statements. Make changes as necessary.
- The carriage tour on the carriage around Charleston was fascinating.
- The reason I enjoyed the ride was because I love historical architecture.
- The carriage driver, he was full of intriguing stories.
- The highlight of the tour was when we saw the outdoor crafts market.
- Despite the wonderful tour, I signed up for another one for next year.