Student Writing Handbook Fifth+Edition

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STEP 8: Writing—Following the Plan


As you develop your cause-and-effect paper, follow the organization established in
the preceding steps. [See Writing a Multi-Paragraph Paper in Chapter 2, Writing, if
you are writing a full-length paper; and see Writing a Paragraph in Chapter 2, Writing,
if you are writing a shorter paper.]


STEP 9: Revising—Checking the Content


Use the following questions to determine where your paper may need revision:


-^ Have I clearly established the cause-and-effect relationship by using
transitional devices?



  • Have^ I^ avoided^ logical^ fallacies?

  • Does^ the^ paper^ begin^ with^ an^ effective^ introduction?^ Does^ it^ give^ something^ of^
    the background and include a thesis or topic sentence? [See thesis sentence or
    topic sentence in the Glossary.]

  • Is^ the^ paper^ well^ structured?^ [See Checking Structure in Chapter 3, Revising.]

  • Have^ I^ maintained^ unity^ by^ omitting^ unrelated^ ideas?^ [See Sample Revision for
    Unity in Chapter 3, Revising.]

  • Does^ each^ body^ paragraph^ include^ a^ topic^ sentence?^ Does^ it^ relate^ directly^
    to the thesis statement? [See Writing a Multi-Paragraph Paper in Chapter 2,
    Writing, for a complete explanation.]

  • Is^ my^ conclusion^ effective?^ [See conclusion in the Glossary.]

  • Have^ I^ used^ good^ sentence^ structure^ and^ achieved^ effective^ sentence^ variety?^
    [See Sample Revision for Sentence Variety in Chapter 3, Revising.]

  • Do^ my^ sentences^ generate^ appropriate^ emphasis?^ [See Sample Revision for
    Emphasis in Chapter 3, Revising.]


If you cannot honestly answer “yes” to each of these questions, you have discovered
areas in need of revision.


[In addition, see Chapter 3, Revising, for general information, including a more detailed
list of questions for guiding your revision.]


STEP 10: Proofreading—Checking for Details


Read your paper for accurate mechanics, usage, and grammar. [Refer to Part IV for
rules and examples.] Check for accurate spelling and word choice.

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