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--=Be:..::s::.=t A. AnarticleinSpaceSciencemagazinerep0l1sthatlengthy
spacestationdutymayleadtophysicalandmental
problemsforastronauts(Clinton16).


-,-,N""-o---,c,-,-,it,,,-, B. AnarticleinSpaceSciencemagazinereportsthat
astronautswholiveaboardspacestationsforlongperiods
oftimemayexperiencephysicalaswellasmental
problems.


_Tc-,-,o:..:o_s::.;i.:..;.m.:.:.. C.AnarticleinSpaceSciencereportsthatlivingina space
stationorbitingEarthfora longtimecancausedifficulties
forastronauts'bodiesandminds(Clinton16).


-=Io.:...c.:;;.../-=.Io.:...o.:..:.c_c.:....__D. AnarticleinSpaceSciencereportsthatastronautswill
becomephysicallysickandhavementalproblemsif
theyvisita spacestation(Clinton16).


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Onemajorproblemis maintainingastronauts'physicalhealth.Medicaltreatment
maybedaysorevenweeksaway,astheremaynotbeadoctoronboard.
Illnessessuchasappendicitisorulcers,routinelytreatedonEarth,couldbefatal
inspacebecauseofthedelayingettingtoa doctor.


__A.NASAphysicianPatrickClintonstatesthatoneproblem

isastronauts'physicalhealth.Withnodoctoronboard,
commonillnesseslikeappendicitisandulcerscouldbe
fataltoastronautsbecauseit wouldtalcetoolongtoget
thembacktoEarth.

__B. NASAphysicianPatrickClintonstatesthatkeepingthe

astronautsphysicallyhealthyisoneproblem.Ifthecrew
doesnotincludea doctor,thedelayingettingtreatment
foranordinaryillness,suchasappendicitisorulcers,
couldmeandeath(16).

__C.NASAphysicianPatrickClintonstatesthatthephysical

healthofastronautsisa hugeproblem.Spaceshipsdonot
usuallyhavemedicaldoctorsamongthecrew,so
astronautswhogetappendicitisona longspacejourney
willdie(16).

__D. NASAphysicianPatrickClintonstatesthatonebig

problemiskeepingastronautsingoodphysicalhealth.
Medicaltreatmentmighttakedaysorweekstogetbecause
theremaynotbea doctoronthespaceship.Ordinary
illnessessuchasappendicitisandulcerscouldbedeadly
becauseit wouldtaketoolongtogettoa doctor(16).
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