Writing Academic English 4th Edition

(Marvins-Underground-K-12) #1

180 Part 111 ISentenceStructure


Intheexamplesthatfollow,thesentencesinthecolumnontherightfollowthe
ruleofparallelism.

Thelanguageskillsofthestudentsintheevening
classesarethesameasthelanguageskillsofthe
studentsinthedayclasses.
(Theitemsarebothnounphrases.)

Theteacherwantedtoknowwhichcountrywecame
fromandwhatourfuturegoalswere.
(Theitemsarebothnounclauses.)

Thestudentswhodowellattendclass,dotheir
homework,andpracticespeakinginEnglish.
(Theitemsareallverbs+complements.)

MyEnglishconversationclassis madeupof
Chinese,Spaniards,andBosnians.
(Theitemsareallnouns.)

Pesticidescannotbesoldif theyhavea harmfuleffectonhumans,onanimallife,
orontheenvironment.

2.Allthewordsinthefirstitemdonotalwayshavetoberepeatedinthe
second.Youmayrepeatallorsomeofthewords,dependingonwhatyou
wishtoemphasize.Thefollowingsentencesarebothcorrect:
Beforeyouwritea paperorbeforeyoutakea test,youmustorganize
yourthoughts.

Beforeyouwritea paperortakeatest,youmustorganizeyourthoughts.

Words,phrases,andclausesthatarejoinedbyand,or,andbutarewlitteninparallel
form.Noticetheparallelstructuresjoinedbycoordinatorsinthefollowingsentences.
TheFederalAirPollutionControlAdministrationregulatesautomobileexhausts,
andtheFederalAviationAdministrationmakessimilarregulationsforaircraft.

Thestatesregulatethenoisecreatedbymotorvehiclesbutnotbycommercial
aircraft.

Thelanguageskillsofthestudentsintheevening
classesarethesameasthedayclasses.

Notes
1.Youmaysubstitutea pronounforthesecond"thelanguageskills"inthe
lastexample:

Thelanguageskillsofthestudentsintheeveningclassesarethesameas
thoseofthestudentsinthedayclasses.

MyEnglishconversationclassismadeupofChinese,
Spaniards,andsomearefromBosnia.

The teacherwantedtoknowwhichcountrywecame
fromandourfuturegoals.

Thestudentswhodowellattendclass,theydotheir
homework,andpracticespeakinginEnglish.

ParallelismwithCoordinators:And,Or,But..
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