Writing Academic English 4th Edition

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RelativePronounsandAdverbs


refertopeople

refertoanimalsandthings
refertoa timeora place

who,whom,whose,that

which,whose,that
when,where

Anadjectiveclausebeginswitha relativepronounorrelativeadverb.

Inthefollowingexamples,noticethattheadjectiveclausecomesimmediately
aftertheantecedentscientistsnomatterwherescientistsappearsinthesentence.
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Scientistswhostudyfossilsarecalledpaleontologists.

Recently,a friend~ofmineat theUniversityof Toronto,---------whois majoringinelectrical
engineering,receiveda governmentgranttostudyairportrunwaylighting.

YesterdayI spentanhourinthelibraryreadingthearticlefromScientificAmerican
thattheinstructorhadputonreserve.

Chapter 14 IAdjectiveClauses 231

Occasionally,otherwordsmaycomebetweentheantecedentandtheadjective
clause.

Sometimesanadjectiveclausemodifiesanentiresentence.Inthiscase,it comesat
theendofthesentence.Therelativepronounis alwayswhich, andtheclauseis
alwaysnonrestrictive.

Theteamwonthechampionship,whichshockedtheopponents.

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Thegovernmentawardslargecontractseachyeartoscientistswhodoresearch
forthegovernment.

Adjectiveclausesareonewaytoimproveyourwritingstylebecausetheyuse
subordinationtoconnectideas.Subordination,ratherthancoordination(usinglots
ofandsandbutstoconnectideas)is themarkofa maturewritingstyle.However,
takecarenottousetoomanyadjectiveclauses.Aparagraphoressaythatisfilled
withtoomanywho'sandwhich'sis notgoodeither.

ADVERBS

PRONOUNS

CONFUSING Heleftthegiftinhisfriend'scarthathehadjustbought.
(Itisnotclearwhethertheadjectiveclausemodifiescarorgift.)

CORRECTED Heleftthegiftthathehadjustboughtinhisfriend'scar.
(Theadjectiveclauseclearlymodifiesgift.)

Positionof Toavoidconfusion,anadjectiveclauseshouldcomerightafteritsantecedent.
A.djective
Clauses
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