Writing Academic English 4th Edition

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Chapter 2 IUnityandCoherence 31


  1. Atsunamiisa tidalwaveproducedbyanearthquakeontheoceanfloor.The
    wavesareverylongandlowinopenwater,butwhentheygetclosetoland,
    theyencounterfriction^4 becausethewateris shallow _
    thewavesincreaseinheightandcancauseconsiderabledamagewhenthey
    finallyreachland.(ontheotherhand,asa result,forexample)


B. Fillineachblank:withanappropriatetransitionsignalfromthelistprovided.
Useeachsignalonlyonce.Addpunctuationifnecessary.
forexample infact similarly also
indeed third second finalandmostconvincing


Time
OnestereotypeaboutNorthAmericanssaysthattheyareobsessedwith^5
time.It sometimesseemstruethatforNorthAmericans,timeseemsas
valuableasmoney.(1) theyevensay,"Timeis money."
(2) haveyounoticedhowmanyverbscanbefqlloJlVed
bybothtimeandmoney?(3) youcanspendtime,
savetime,losetime,findtime,maketime,wastetime,andrunoutoftime.
(4) youcanspend,save,lose,find,make,waste,andrun
outofmoney.(5) NorthAmericansseemtoregardtime
asa "thing"thatonecanown.Youcanhavetime,buytime,andtaketime.(One
wondershowmuchit costsandwhereit is taken.)A(6) _
pieceofevidencethatNorthAmericansareobsessedwithtimeis their
fanaticismaboutalwaysbeingontime.(7) peoplewhoare
habituallylateriskpunishmentrangingfromfrowningdisapprovaltolosingtheir
jobs.The(8) proofis thatthesepoorpeoplesometimes
takecoursesintimemanagement!Thatis reallyoverdoingit,don'tyouagree?

C. Improvethecoherenceofthefollowingparagraphbyaddingtransitionsin
theblankspaces.Usethehintsprovidedinparenthesestohelpyouchoose
a transition.

MoveOver,DVD.HereComesBD!
First,CDsbroughtdigitalsoundintoourhomes.ThenOVOtechnology
broughtdigitalsoundandvideoandrevolutionizedthemovieindustry.Soonthere
willbe(1) (additionalidea)revolution:8lu-raydiscs(80s).
A 8lu-raydiscwillhaveseveraladvantages.(2) (listin
order)it hasanenormousdatastoragecapacity.A single-sidedOVOcanhold
4.7gigabytesofinformation,aboutthesizeofanaverage2-hourmovie.A single-
sided80,(3) (contrast),canholdupto 27 gigabytes,
enoughfor 13 hoursofstandardvideo.A(4) (listinorder)

4friction:resistance
50 bsessedwith:fanaticalabout
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