C: YOU MISREAD THE PROMPT
Problem
The
writer.
..
Solution/Strategy
Is
completely
off topic.
You perhaps charged too quickly out of the starting gate, with your eyes on the finish
line instead of on your strategy for winning. You will not earn a high score if you’re
writing a different essay than the one you’re expected to write. The prompt is carefully
written to guide you. Use it. Read it several times. Underline the actual task. (See
Chapter 14 for more help with this.)
Focuses
on the
wrong
elements.
If the prompt lists specific literary elements to consider, pay attention to that list. The
exam writers are telling you that these elements are at work in the text. If you go off on
your own, you risk a limited or wrong analysis. On the other hand, they may be testing
your ability to choose the most significant literary devices in a text from the list given. If
you focus on the wrong choice, you risk a lower score. The key to choosing the right
elements is prevalence or dominance. The more the literary element aids the writer in
his or her purpose, the more you can write about it.
Has gone
off topic
and failed
to connect
with the
main intent
of the
prompt.
According to the College Board, “prompts evolve from passages and are written to
stimulate and open up discussion, not provide closure.” However, once stimulated, your
mind cannot journey somewhere unrelated to the prompt, as that will be seen as a
misreading.
In choosing literary elements to consider for your essay, remember that in analyzing
poetry, it will be rare that the rhyme scheme has any effect at all. While it is easy to
determine a rhyme scheme, what will you say about its effect? It is not enough to
identify literary elements. You must also show how they function in a literary work.