272 Moving Images: Making Movies, Understanding Media
On American television, writer Larry David, who was a co-creator of the
show Seinfeld, uses story outlines for the episodes of his show Curb Your
Enthusiasm, from which the actors improvise their dialogue and behavior
from the indicated dramatic context and narrative structure.
Th ere are many factors to consider in developing stories and bringing
them to the screen. Th e materials you create are meant to make the production
and post-production processes as fruitful as possible. From the initial
inspirations and visions that provoke us to want to create motion pictures,
it is a tremendously challenging process to transform them into a series of
shots that make up sequences and well-developed stories.
Words and Pictures: Finding a Flow
Returning to our fi ve story examples featuring Sarah, Hector, Jimmy, and the
others, consider “putting into continuity” the second passage. Th e scene with
Hector would require substantial re-imagining. We can see Hector eating
cereal and his mother talking on the phone, but a signifi cant amount of the
information in the narration is inside Hector’s head or delivered through
commentary by the author. How can the screenwriter set up this story?
Remember the lessons we have learned about cinematic storytelling: visual
solutions are oft en the most eff ective. Th e screenwriter might see fi t to have
Hector tell another character what he is thinking or address the audience
through voice-over, but how can this be done interestingly? In what ways
can it be done visually?
Setting up the Story
In a movie, when a character explains the background for a scene or a
situation, this is an example of a device called exposition. Exposition is
a component of storytelling used so that audiences can understand the
context of a narrative and key information that they would not otherwise
be aware of through the images they see on the screen, such as character
backgrounds, historical conditions, or an upcoming event linked to the past.
It is oft en delivered by an on-screen conversation or voice-over, although
it can also be conveyed through news reports, visual indications (such as
signs), or written cues.
When we set up a story—and particularly a short one—a primary
challenge for the writer is to bring the audience right into the narrative.
Exposition—such as lengthy explanations—can make the movie drag or
seem artifi cial. Th e challenge to the writer is to inform the audience of key
information in a way that helps to move the story forward and adds to the
depiction of the narrative. Many short fi lms place the spectator right in front
of a scene or series of sequences in which we experience the story directly
through the events that we see. Th ey may off er no backstory at all: What we
see happening in front of us is what we get. We understand the characters
only through the scenes taking place without fl ashbacks and explanations
of past events or relationships.
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