Best Practice Book for IELTS Writing

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However,themainconcernisaboutthetypeofcomputeractivitiesthatattractchildren.
Theseareoftenelectronicgamesthattendto beveryintenseandrather violent.The
playerisusuallythe‘hero’ofthegameandtoomuchexposurecanencouragechildren
to beself-centredandinsensitiveto others.
Evenwhenchildren useacomputerfor otherpurposes,suchasgettinginformation
oremailingfriends,itisno
substituteforhumaninteraction.Spendingtimewith otherchildrenandsharing
nonvirtualexperiencesisanimportantpart


ofachild'sdevelopmentthatcannotbe provided byacomputer.
Inspiteofthis,theobviousbenefitsofcomputerskillsforyoungchildrencannot be
denied.Theiradultworldwillbechangingconstantlyintermsoftechnologyandthe
Internetisthekeytoalltheknowledgeandinformationavailableintheworldtoday.
Thereforeitisimportantthatchildrenlearnatanearlyageto usetheequipment
enthusiasticallyandwithconfidenceastheywillneedtheseskillsthroughouttheir
studiesandworkinglives.
Ithinkthemain pointistomakesurethat youngchildrendo notoverusecomputers.
Parentsmustensurethattheirchildrenlearntoenjoy otherkindsofactivityand not
simplysitathome,learningtoliveinavirtualworld.


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Sample 23


Youshouldspendabout 40 minutesonthistask.
Writeaboutthefollowingtopic:


Intoday'scompetitiveworld,manyfamiliesfinditnecessaryforbothparentsto
go outtowork. Whilesomesaythechildreninthesefamiliesbenefitfromthe
additionalincome, othersfeeltheylacksupportbecauseoftheirparents'
absence.


Givereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourown
knowledgeorexperience.


Writeatleast 250 words.


modelanswer:


Inthepastatypicalfamilyconsisted ofafatherwhowentouttoworkandamotherwho
stayedathomeandlookedafterthechildren.Nowadays,itisthenormforboth parents
towork.Thissituationcanaffectchildren both positivelyand negatively.Somepeople
thinkthatthechildren ofworking parentsareinanadvantageous positionwheretheir
parentsareabletoaffordmereluxuriessuchasnewclothes, video gamesormobile
phones.Proponents ofthisviewarguethatchildrenareabletoenjoyandexperience
morefromlifedue

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