Best Practice Book for IELTS Writing

(Axel Boer) #1

Tomymind,there'sno doubtwelivein amedia-richsociety,andthere'snothingwecan
doaboutthat.Whatwecan doisusethemediaresponsiblyand notletituseus.


( 327 words)


Sample 41


Youshouldspendabout 40 minutesonthistask.


Childrenshouldneverbeeducatedat
homebytheirparents.Do youagreeordisagree?
Discusstheadvantagesanddisadvantagesforyoungpeoplewhodecideto
dothis.


Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.


modelanswer:


Nobodycansaywithconfidencethatchildrenshould betaughtathomeorat
anychildren'sinstitutions.Therearemany differentchildrenandevery onedemand
ofeducationsuitableonlyforhim.
Butformostofchildrenthebestway oflearningthelifeisbeinginthechildren's
institutions.Nobodywouldarguethat


contactsbetweenchildren ofthesameageareveryimportantforbringing yourchild up.
Suchacontactisveryimportantfor playing,entertainingandlearninglivingwith other
people.Theharmoniouslivingwith otherpeople,tomymind,isthefirsttaskforany
man.Lack ofthisharmonysetsproblemsandtroubles.
Thechildren needspacetorunandmake noise,tojumpandcry.Do you oryour
neighboursallowtheseactionsforyourchild?Ifyouliveintown,itisdifficulttofinda
safeplaceto play.Kindergartens givesuchapossibility.They givespace, alotoftoys
andconstructionsforphysicalexercises.So,ifyou havebadlivingconditions,the
kindergartenisthebestwayforyou.Butifyou havealargefamilywithmanychildren
andenoughspace, youmay keep yourchildathome.


Youshould besurethatthechildfeels, dressedandcomfortable.Hisbrothersand
sistersgivehimnecessarycontacts.It's noticedlongagothatchildrenin bigfamilies
aremuchmoreeasy-temperedandcalm.Theyarelocatedinmore harmonicworld
than others.
Sometimesdifferencesinageputtroublesincontactsbetweenchildreninlarge
families.Thenitisbetterforchildto besenttothekindergarten(school).Butif quarrels
don'tlastforalongtime,everythingisallright.In general, quarrels developabilityto
cooperatewith people.They developapersonalinitiativeand
forcesettingthebalance.Insuchawaythechild getslessonsoflife.Addly,the quarrels
oftentakeplacein kindergartensandschoolsandweshouldn'tfearit.

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