Best Practice Book for IELTS Writing

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modelanswer:
Oneofthegreatestadvantagesisthatthechildrenlearnto beindependent.Having
tocook,clean,and pay billsinstillsthisinthem.Oftenthey havetowork part-timeto
makeendsmeet,andthisimpressesuponthemtheimportanceofworkandmoney
management.
Anotherimportantfactoristhatthesechildrenwillbeexposedto differentcultures
andwaysofthinking.Theywill becomemoreopen-mindedandtolerantandarelikely
to becomemoreadaptableindividuals.
Oneofthemainmotivesforsending young peopleabroadtostudyisthatitenhances
theiremploymentprospects.Inmyexperienceoflivinginforeigncountriesand
speakingto variousyouths,itseemsthataforeigneducationisregardedas
something desirableand


helpfulin gettingadecentjob.AdegreefromBritain,forexample,isseenasbeing ofa
higherstandardthan onefroma developingcountry.Furthermore,livinginaforeign
countrymayleadtofluencyin asecondlanguage,whichisanotherselling pointfor
prospectiveemployers.Inaddition,manycompaniesarekeentorecruitpeoplewitha
globaloutlook.
Thereareafewdrawbackshowever.Forinstance,withoutparentalsupervision,the new
foundfreedomchildrenexperiencemayleadto harmfulpracticessuchas
drug-takingand drinking.Reluctanceorinabilitytoreintegrateintotheirmother
countryisanother.Tosumup,itcan beseenthattheadvantagesofstudyingabroad
forchildrenaremorenumerousthanthedisadvantages.Ofcoursealot


dependsontheageofthechild, butI believethatformostteenagersitwould bea
positiveexperience.


( 266 words)


Sample 56


Youshouldspendabout 40 minutesonthistask.


Nowadays,internationaltourismisthebiggestindustryintheworld.
Unfortunately,internationaltourismcreatestensionratherthanunderstanding
betweenpeoplefromdifferentcultures.
Towhatextentdo youagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?


Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.
Givereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourown
knowledgeorexperience.


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