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(Axel Boer) #1

Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.
Givereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourown
knowledgeorexperience.


modelanswer:


Somepeoplesaythattheinvention ofcomputersisoneofthegreatest humankind's
inventions.However, other peoplethinkthatcomputersmaketheirlifemorestressful.
Iagreewiththose peoplewhothinkthatcomputersbroughtmany benefitsand playa
veryimportantrolein ourmodernlife.
Firstofall,everycompany nowadaysusesacomputertostoreitsdataandmake
differentkindsofoperations.Itisvery difficulttoimaginelifewithoutcomputers.A
companywould haveto
storemillionsofpapersand documents.Moreover,acustomerwould havetowait hours
tocheck hisbalanceorgetapieceofinformationabouthistransactionsathis bank,
whileanemployeewaslookingtroughthosepapers.Anotherimportantaspectofthisis
thatpeopleareableto


typealltheirinformation,makecorrections,printorsend documentsusingcomputers.It
makeslifemucheasier.OnecanspendtherestofthetimewatchingTVwith hisfamily
orworking onsomething new.
Weusecomputersevery daysometimeseven notknowingit.Whenwegoto astore
and useourcreditcardsmanycomputersprocessourinformationand
performtransactions.Whenweneedto getsomecashweusemoneyaccessmachines
thatarecomputerizedtoo.
Second ofall,computersprovidedagreatmeansofcommunication-theInternet. I
thinkitistheeasiestandcheapestwayto getintouchwithrelatives,friends, business
colleagues,etc.Nowadaystheworld becomessmallerandsmaller.When


Iwasalittlegirl,Icould notimaginethatitwould bepossibletocommunicatewith
peoplefromallaroundtheworldinsoeasyway.Apersoncan getlatestnews, become
friendswithsomeonefromanothercountry,find hisoldfriends,askforapieceof
advice,etc.
Finally,inadditiontothesepractical benefitspeoplecanshopwithoutleavingtheir
house.TheyjustuseanInternetaccess,acomputerandtheircardstomakeapayment.
Itiskind ofdifficultto
imaginethatafewyearsago peoplehadtospendtheirtimeinlinesbuyingtickets.Now,
apersoncanchooseadestination,company, dateandtimeand gettickets deliveredto
hisdoor.Ithinkitisamazing.Tosumup,Ibelievethatcomputersmade ourlives
easier.Theychangeourattitudetowardslife.Ithinkwiththeinvention of


computerspeoplebecamecloserandfriendlier.


( 404 words)


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