Best Practice Book for IELTS Writing

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touristsmeanalotofnew businessopportunities.Anotherimportantaspectofthisis
thatbusinessmenwillbewillingto build newrecreationalcenters, hotels,movie
theaters,shoppingcenterstomakeacitymoreattractivefortravelers.
Inadditiontothosepracticalbenefits,many peoplewillhavetheopportunityto geta
job.Allthisisgoodfortheeconomy ofthecity.


Tosumup,Ibelievethatpreserving old,historicalbuildingscan bring only benefitstoa
cityandallhumankind.


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Sample 91


Youshouldspendabout 40 minutesonthistask.


Thegovernmenthasannouncedthatitplanstobuildanewuniversity.
Somepeoplethinkthatyourcommunitywouldbea goodplacetolocatethe
university.
Comparetheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofestablishing anew
universityinyourcommunity.
Usespecificdetailsinyourdiscussion.
Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.


modelanswer:


Ithinkitisagreatideato buildanew universityinmycommunity.However, Ithinkitis
acontroversialquestionwhetherthebuilding ofanewuniversitywillbring only benefits
to ourcommunity.InthisessayIwillanalyzeadvantagesand disadvantagesofthis
issueand presentmy viewinfavorofestablishinganew universityinmycommunity.
Fromtheoneside,establishinganew universityinmycommunity bringsmany benefits.
Firstofall,anewconstructionmeansmorejob opportunities.Ithinkitwould begoodfor
mycommunity because


many peoplehavetospendmuchtime drivingtotheirwork dayinand day out because
theycould notfindajobin our neighborhood.Second ofall,anew universityisagood
chancetomeetnew peopleandIlikethisopportunity.Manystudentswilllivein our
community.Finally,ifanewuniversityisbuiltinmycommunitythereisabigchance
thatIwill bewillingtoenrollinit.Ithinkitisgreat becauseitisnotfarfrommy place
and I
do nothavetomovetoanotherpartofthecity.Anotherimportantaspectofthisisthat
peoplefrommycommunitywillhaveachanceto usenewlibrariesandfacilities ofa
newuniversity.Forexamplesome peoplecantakecoursesandclassesthere.Fromthe
otherside, buildinganew universitycan bringsomedisadvantages.Anewconstruction
meansnoise,traffic

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