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jamsand differentkindsofpollution.Inadditiontothesedisadvantages,many young
peoplein ourcommunitycancausemorenoiseespeciallyintheevenings.
Tosumup,IthinkthatIwouldsupportthe decision ofthegovernmentofestablishinga
newuniversityinmycommunity despiteafewdisadvantagesthatcouldfollowthis
construction.Ibelievethatanew universitywillincreaseachanceofmany young
peopleto getahighereducation, gainmoreknowledgeandexperience,whichwillhelp
themtosucceedintoday’sworld.


( 341 words)


Sample 92


Youshouldspendabout 40 minutesonthis


task.


Acompanyhasannouncedthatitwishestobuildalargefactorynearyour
community.
Discusstheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofthisnewinfluenceon your
community.
Do yousupportoropposethefactory?Explainyourposition.


Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.


modelanswer:


IamfromSaint-Petersburg,Russia. I believethatbuildingalargefactory nearmy
community hasadvantagesaswellas


disadvantages.Inthefollowing paragraphs
Iwilllistbasicbenefitsandlossesthatwillbebroughtbyanewfactory.
Forseveralreasons,Ithinkthatanewfactorywillnotbeagoodadditiontomy
neighborhood.Firstofall,factoriesoften bring pollution.Theyareproneto
contaminatingthelocalairandwater.Second ofall,factoriesmakenoise.Another
importantaspectofbuilding a
newfactory nearbyisthatitwillmakethelocaltrafficheavy.Asaresultofthis,the
amountoftrafficcongestionswill
increase,aswellascontamination oftheair.So,alltheseobviouslywillnotmake
one'slifehappierand healthierinmycommunity.
Fromtheotherside,Ibelievethatanewfactorywillbringsomeadvantagestomy
community.Firstofall,itwillbring new


job opportunities.Manyspecialistswillberequiredtoworkthere.Second ofall, Ithink
manylocalcommunityfacilitieswill haveto berenovatedto obtainreliablesupply of
waterandelectricity.So,some old pipesmay bechanged.Anotherimportantbenefitof
thisisthatthelocalroadsin ordertomanagetheincreasingtrafficwillberebuiltand

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