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widened.However,Ido notthinkthatlistedabove benefitsareworthallthesetroubles
includingwatercontaminationandtheconstantpollution ofair.Frommy pointof viewall
factoriesmustbebuiltfarfrom
thepeoplecommunitiesbecausetheycan bereally harmfulforpeople'shealth.


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Sample 93
Youshouldspendabout 40 minutesonthistask.


Ithasrecentlybeenannouncedthatanewmovietheatermaybebuiltinyour
neighborhood.
Do yousupportoropposethisplan? Why?
Usespecificreasonsanddetailstosupportyouranswer.


Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.


modelanswer:


Iliveinasmallcommunity.Frommyeverydayexperienceand observationIcansay
thattheideaaboutbuildinganew


theatreinmy neighborhood hassomeadvantagesaswellasdisadvantages.Inthis
essayIwillfirstfocusonthereasonswhyIsupportthisideaandthenmoveonto
analyzingwhyIopposeit.
Firstofall,Ilikemoviesandmy husbandandIsometimesgotothemovietheatreto
watch premieres.Unfortunately,itistime-consumingforus.Wehaveto driveabout
50 minutestothenearestmoviestheatre.So,theideaofhavingamovietheatrein our
neighborhoodseemsveryattractive.Itwouldsaveusan hourjustto getthereand
anotherhourto getback home.Anotherimportantaspectofitisthatinthiscase
wewillbeableto gettothemovietheatre byfoot.Imusttoconfessthatwealways
haveparkingtroublesintheparkingspace nearthemovietheatre.
Second ofall, newmovietheatreisavery
good placeforstudentswhowanttoearnsomemoney.My husbandandIliveneara
studentcommunity,soIthinkitwould be
agreatnewsforthem.Inadditiontothis practicalbenefitstudentswillbeabletowatch
allmoviesfreeofcharge.Isupposeitisagreatwaytosavesomemoney.Finally,there
areusuallymanyrestaurantsandentertainingcentersaroundamovietheatre.There
peoplecan havedinneror play gamemachines.
Incontrast,Ithinkthatthebuilding ofa newmovietheatrewilldestroythesilenceand
beauty ofoutcommunity.Suchentertainingcentersareoften noisy.Moreover,traffic
jamswillprobably betheresultofit.
Inconclusion,Ithinkthatifthequestionwasaboutbuildinganewmovietheatreinthe
nextneighborhoodIwouldcompletely


agree.

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