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(Axel Boer) #1

Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.


modelanswer:


Ashuman'spopulationisdramaticallyrisingevery year, people'srequirementsare
increasingtoo.Weneedmorefood,
morefreshwater,moreplacestolive.Asaresultofthismany partsoftheworldare
losingessentialandsometimesirreplaceableresources,suchasforest,animals, or
freshwater.InthisessayIwillfocusonthethreatofdisappearingmanywildanimals.


ThereasonwhyIthinkthatanimalsshould bepreservedisthatalllivingcreatureson
thisplanetareconnectedwitheach other.So,thedisappearanceofonly onespecies
cancausedramaticchangesintheplanetandeven death ofmany otherliving
creatures.Forexample,the disappearanceofbatswillcausethehugeincreasing of
insectpopulationandthiswillreflectonallanimalsand plants.Anotherexampleisthat
ifthepopulation ofbatsincreases,thepopulation ofinsectswilldecreasesignificantly,
andthiswillcausethedisappearanceofmany plants becauseinsectsarethemain
pollinators.So,Ithinkitisveryimportantto preserveallspecieson ourplanetandlive
in harmonywith ourenvironment.
AnotherimportantreasonwhyIthinkthatanimalsshould besavedisthatI,


personally, do notwantmychildtolearnaboutdifferentanimalsfrombooksand not
beabletoseethemalive.Ithinkitisshamefulforhumankindtoexplain ourchildren
thatwearethereasonwhythoseanimalsdisappeared.
Inconclusion,Iwouldliketosaythattheissueaboutlosingimportantnaturalresources
istopicaland openfordebate nowadays.Ibelievethattogetherpeoplecanmakea
difference.Frommy pointof view,thefirstproblemweshouldfind asolutionforis
human'soverpopulation.AsImentionedabovepeople'sdemandsare growingandthis
meansweconsumemoreandmorenaturalresources.Thesecond question,whichison
thelistofmostimportantissues,ispollutionincludingtheairpollution,waterpollution,
etc.


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Sample 97


Youshouldspendabout 40 minutesonthistask.


Somepeoplethinkthathumanneedsforfarmland,housing, andindustry aremore
importantthansavinglandforendangeredanimals.Do youagreeordisagreewith
thispointofview? Why orwhynot?
Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.


Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.
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