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ordaughter.Studies haveindicatedthatover 65 %ofchildrenwhoarebroughtup
withoutsiblingsshowself-centered behaviorfinditdifficultcooperatingwiththeirpeers.
Insummary,therearemanyfactorsthat havecausedchildrentolivevery differently
fromthegeneration beforethem.Therearehigh hopesthatparentsexercise(s)
wisdomintreatingtheirchildren.


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Sample 111


Youshouldspendabout 40 minutesonthistask.


Inmanycountries,sportsandexerciseclassesarereplacedwiththeacademic
subjects.Discusstheeffectsofthistrend.


Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.


modelanswer:


Overthepastfewdecades,academicsubjectshavebecomeincreasingly


importantinthisfast-changinginformation-basedsociety.Nowadays,therehasbeena
growing debateastowhetheritwould bemoreeffectivetoreplacephysicaleducation
classeswithacademicsubjects.Despitetheimportance ofsports,Ihighly believethatit
isinevitableandmoreefficienttofocus
moreonacademicsubjectsforseveralreasons.
Thosewhoarguethatsportsandexerciseclassesareneededinschoolbasetheir
caseonthefollowingarguments.Firstofall,sportsareagoodwayto build
characterand develop personality.Thatis,therearenecessaryforlearningabout
competition,cooperation,and goodsportsmanship.Inaddition,asamajority ofchildren
thesedaysareaddictedtotheInternet,theyfindithardtoleavetheir


computer.Consequently,agrowing numberofchildrenarebecoming overweightor
obeseduetoalack ofexercise.So,ifschoolsfosteranenvironmentthatdeprives
studentsof gettingaproperphysicaleducation,itwill havealong-termnegativeeffect
onchildren bothmentallyand physically.Nevertheless, peopleshould notignorethefact
thatdevotingmoretimeandenergytoacademicsubjectswillbenefitstudentsmorein
thelongrun.Thetimedevotedto physicaleducationnowwould bebetterspentteaching
studentsEnglish.Thisis becausespeakingfluentEnglishwillgive young peoplean
advantageoverothercollegeapplicantsandjobseekersinthe nearfuture.Besides,
sciencewill undoubtedly benefityouthmorethan physicaleducationaswell.The
principles


learnedinsciencewillprovidethe necessaryfoundationforsolvingand difficult
problemsthataresuretoariseinstudents'futures.
Insummary,therearehigh hopesthateducatorsand parentsexercisewisdomin
teaching young generations.

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