Best Practice Book for IELTS Writing

(Axel Boer) #1

( 300 words)


Sample 112


Youshouldspendabout 40 minutesonthistask.


Somepeopleinsistthatseniorworkers
65 orovershouldretirebutothersbelievethattheyshouldcontinue
working. Whatisyouopinion?


Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.


modelanswer:


Overthepastfewdecades[Inthepast],therehavebeenmanyadvancesinmedical
technology.Becauseofthis,senior
citizensarehealthierandmoreactivethan beforeandmaychoosetowork beyondthe
ageof65.Nowadays, however,therehas beenagrowing debateastowhetherornot
thesepeopleshouldretirein orderto
createjobsfortheyoungergeneration.Despitetheadvantagesofearlyretirement,I
strongly believethatitisbetterfor
seniorworkerstocontinueworkingaslongastheyarephysicallyandmentally
capable.
Thosewho believethatseniorworkers needtoretireforyoungergeneration base


theircaseonthefollowingarguments.First,theunemploymentrate,especiallyfor
collegegraduates, hasneverbeenso highsoitistoday.Thisislargely duetotheslow
economy.Therefore,firingsomeelderlyworkerswhoarewell-paidwouldallowthose
unemployed young peopleto havegood opportunitiesto getajob.Inaddition,replacing
olderworkerswith young peoplewould bring greaterbenefitstocompanies
[=employers].Thisis becauseyoungstersarebetteratadaptingthemselvestofast
changinginformation basedsociety.Theyaregenerally betteratcomputersand
speakingforeignlanguagesthantheiroldercounterparts.
Nevertheless, peopleshould notignorethefactthatseniorcitizenshavebeen playing
vitalrolesbothathomeandatworkfortheirentirelives.To beginwith,ayoung


person'sneedforajobisnomoreimportantthanan olderperson's.Both havea
responsibilitytosupporttheirfamilies.Sadly,fewseniorscanaffordearlyretirement.
Besides,seniorworkers providethewisdomandexperiencethat youngemployees
cannotoffer.Thereisstrong[=acute]possibility ofsituationsarisingthatrequirethe
knowledgeofskilledsenioremployees.
Insummary,theadvantagesofkeepingseasonedworkersfaroutweighits
disadvantages.Therearehigh hopesthatemployersexercisewisdom[=caution]in
dealingwiththisissue.
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Sample 113
Youshouldspendabout 40 minutesonthistask.

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