Best Practice Book for IELTS Writing

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modelanswer:


Every year,millionsofanimalsundergo painfulsuffering ordeathasaresultof
scientificresearchintotheeffectsof drugs,foodadditives,cosmeticsand other
chemicalproducts.Whilemostpeoplethinkanimaltestingisnecessary, othersare
upsetbywhattheyseeasneedlesssuffering.Thisessaylooksatsomeofthepositive
and negativeaspectsofanimal


testing.
Manymedicaltreatmentsand procedures havebeen developedfromexperimentson
animals.Sinceanimalssharemanyfeatureswith humans,scientistsuse
animalstotestthesafetyandeffectiveness ofnewly developed drugsbeforepilot
testing onsmallgroupsofpatients.Medicalteamspracticenewoperatingtechniques
suchastransplantsonanimals.Withoutanimaltesting,many procedures ornewdrugs
would beextremely unsafe.However,many peopleareconcernedthatanimalsare
suffering unnecessarilyandcruelly.They do notbelievethatevery
newdrug needsto betested onanimals,especiallywiththehugedatabaseof
knowledgeandmoderncomputermodels.Theyalsoareworriedthatmanyanimal
testsareineffective, pointing outthatany


drugshavehadto bewithdrawnfromthemarketdespiteextensivetesting.They
particularlyfeelthatanimaltestingshould notbeusedfornon-essentialproducts
suchascosmetics,shampoos,soaps,andcleaning products.Furthermore,some
campaignerswouldliketoseecertaintestsreplacedandmorehumanemethodsused.
Weneedtomakesurethatthemillionsofanimalswhoareusedfortesting new
productsaretreatedwiththeminimumofsuffering.Althoughsomeanimaltestingmay
beunavoidableatpresent,treating
ourfellowcreaturesasmercifullyas possiblewilldemonstrateourhumanity.


267 words


Sample 119
Inthepast,buildingsoftenreflectedthecultureofasocietybuttoday allmodern
buildingslookalikeandcitiesthroughouttheworldarebecoming
moreandmoresimilar.
Whatdo youthinkisthereasonforthis, andisita goodthinkorabadthink?


Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.

Allowyourself 40 minutesforthistask.

Youshoulduseyourownideas,knowledgeandexperienceand
supportyourargumentswithexamples.

modelanswer:


city hasitsarchitecturalcharacter, butthesimilaritiesbetweencitiesaremore obvious
thesedaysthaninthepast.Inmy opinion, onereasonforthisisthehigh priceofland.

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