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Manypeoplebelievethatwomenmakebetterparentsthanmenandthatthisis
whytheyhavethegreaterroleinraising


childreninmostsocieties.Othersclaimthatmenarejustasgoodaswomenat
parenting.
Writeanessayexpresing yourpointof view.


Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.

Youshouldspendabout 40 minutes onthistask.

modelanswer:


Theviewthatwomenarebetterparentsthanmen hasshownitselfto betrue
throughouthistory.Thisisnottosaythatmenarenotofimportanceinchild-


rearingindeed,theyaremostnecessaryifchildrenaretoappreciatefullytherolesof
bothsexes.Butwomen haveproventhemselvessuperiorparentsasaresultoftheir
conditioning,theirlessaggressive naturesandtheirgenerally bettercommunication
skills.
Fromthetimetheyarelittlegirls,femaleslearnaboutnurturing.Firstwith dollsand
laterperhapswith youngerbrothersandsisters, girlsaregiventheroleofcarer.Girls
seetheirmothersinthesamerolesandsoitisnaturalthattheyidentifythis
asafemaleactivity.Boys,incontrast,learncompetitiverolesfarremovedfromwhatit
meansto nurture.Whileboysmay dreamofadventures, girls'conditioningmeansthey
tendtoseethefutureinterms ofraisingfamilies.
Girlsalsoappearto belessaggressivethan
boys.Inadulthood,itismen, notwomen,who proveto betheaggressorsincrimeand
inwar.Obviously,inraisingchildren,
amorepatient, gentlemannerispreferabletoamoreaggressiveone.Althoughthere
certainlyexistgentlemenandaggressivewomen, byandlarge,femalesarelesslikely
toresortto violenceinattemptingtosolveproblems.
Finally,womentendto bebettercommunicatorsthanmen.Thisisshownisintelligence
tests,wherefemales, onaverage, do betterin verbal
communicationthanmales.Ofcourse,communicationisofutmostimportancein
rearingchildren,aschildrentendtolearnfromandadoptthecommunicationstyles of
theirparents.
Thus,whileitisallverywelltosuggesta greaterroleformeninraisingchildren,let


usnotforgetthatwomenaregenerally bettersuitedtotheparentingrole.


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