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Cupandotherinternationalsporting occasionsareessentialineasing
internationaltensionsandreleasingpatrioticemotionsinasafeway.


Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.

Youshouldspendabout 40 minutes onthistask.

Youshouldgivereasonsforyour answerusing yourownideasand
experience.

modelanswer:


Everyfouryears,thewholeworldstopstowatchinternationalsportingeventssuchas


theOlympicsandtheFootballWorldCupinwhichathletesshowtheirbest
performancetomaketheircountry proud ofthem.Thesesporting occasionshave
provedto behelpfulineasinginternationaltensionsin difficulttimeswhen powerful
leadersweretryingtocontroltheworld'seconomyand other governmentswere
fighting overland.
TheOlympicGamesareoneofthebestexampleswhich provehowsportingeventscan
bring nationstogether,atleasttemporarily.FromancientHistory,whenGreeksand
Romanswouldinterrupt
battlesto participateinthegames,tothemorerecentinternationaldisputes,when
athletesfromPalestineandIsraelwouldforgettheirdifferences,compete pacifically
andevenembraceeach otherafteranevent.Moreover,thesepopular


eventshavecalledtheworld'sattentiontotheterribleconsequencesofwars;thus
someleadershavetriedtoacceptagreementstoendtheirdisputeandlive peacefully.
Similarly,internationalsportingeventsshowbenefitsinsomedevelopingcountries
whichliveinadailyinternalcivilwar.Forexample,Brazilhasahighrateof
unemployment,lack ofeducation, hunger,crime, povertyandcorruption
whichleadstoanimmenseembarrassment ofbeingBrazilianandalowself-esteem.
However,whentheFootballWorldCupstarts,theBraziliansquad,whichisconsidered
thebestteamintheworld, provokesanamazingfeelingofprideintheircountry.Most
peopleseemtoforgetalltheirproblemsandeventhecriminal


activity decreases.They paintroadswiththenationalcolors, useweartheBrazilian
teamshirtand buy nationalflags.Moreover,thecompetition bringsfamiliesand
neighborstogetherandevenrival gangswatchthegamesandcelebrate peacefully.
Inconclusion, popularsportingevents playanimportantrolein decreasing
internationaltensionsandliberating patrioticfeelingsasHistory hasshown.


Sample 143


Ascomputersarebeingusedmoreandmoreineducation,therewillbesoonno
roleforteachersintheclassroom.

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