Best Practice Book for IELTS Writing

(Axel Boer) #1

modelanswer:


Thereisno doubtthatsomestudentsinschoolsbehavebadlyandtheirbehaviour
causesdifficultyforotherseitherbecause


ithasanegativeeffectonthegroup or becauseordinarystudentsfinditdifficultto
studywiththem.
Onesolutionistotakethesestudentsawayandteachthemontheirown.However,ifwe
simply havethemremovedafteroneortwowarnings,wearelimitingtheireducational
opportunitiesbecauseitseemstomethataschoolwhichcatersfor difficultstudentsis
asortof"prison"whatevernameyou giveitandthepeoplewho gotheremay never
recoverfromtheexperience.Thiscanthencauseproblemsforthewidersociety.
Perhapsweneedtolookatwhythe disruptivestudentsbehavebadly before
weseparatethem.Disruptivestudentsmay beveryintelligentandfindtheclasses
boring becausetheworkistooeasy.Perhapsthesestudentsneedextralessons


ratherthanseparatelessons.Orperhapstheteachersareuninspiringandthis
resultsin behaviouralproblemssowe need betterteachers.Ontheotherhand,
moststudentsputupwiththissituation
ratherthancausetrouble,andsomepeoplearguethatwehavetolearntosufferbad
teachersand boringsituationsandthatstudentswhocan'tlearnthislesson needto be
taughtseparately.
So beforewecondemnthestudentsto aspecialschool,weshouldlookatfactors
suchastheteaching, becauseoncethechildren havebeenseparated,itisvery
unlikelythattheywillbebroughtback.


Sample 157


"Althoughabuseofthesystemare
inevitable,socialwelfarepaymentsareessentialtoprotecttherightscitizens
haveto a guaranteedminimumincomeinademocraticsociety"


Discuss.


Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.

Youshouldspendabout 40 minutes onthistask.

modelanswer:


Socialwelfareisanessentialelementofanadvancedsociety.Goodsystemsare
alwaysabused, butthatdoesnotmeantheyarefaulty.Inmy opinion,thetwo


mainreasonswhywelfarepaymentsare necessaryareasfollows:
Firstofall,criticsforgetthattherearemanyformsofwelfarebesidespaymentstothe
unemployed.Theirnegative opinionsharmthosewhoarenotcapable ofearninga
wage,suchassingle-parentmothers,thedisabled,andthesick.Moreover,the

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