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unemployed havetherighttoanincome,too.Theyarenotalwaysatfaultfornothaving
ajob,andinmostcasesthetaxthey havepaidinthepastentitlesthemtoassistance.
Thesecondreasonisthatcrimeincreaseswhen peoplehavenomeansofsupport.The
desperately poorinevitablyturntocrime,whichisnotonly dangerousbutcostly.
Policingthestreetsismoreexpensivethan providingwelfare. A policeman'swageis
fourorfivetimes


higherthana"dole"payment.
Certainmembersofsociety believethat peopleshouldlookafterthemselves.They
pointoutthatwelfareincreases dependency on othersand destroys
dignity.Thismay betrue, butinthecase
oftheunemployed,thereliefpaymentsare usuallytemporary.Itissurelythefaultofthe
governmentiftherearelong-term unemployed.Welfarecriticsalso believethatitisthe
responsibility ofavictim'sfamilyto providefinancialassistance.However,itistoo
expensiveto providecompletehelpforaseverely disabled person.
Toconclude,itisvitalto understandthe needforwelfareinamodern democratic
society.Withoutwelfarepaymentsthe pooraredestinedto becomepoorer.Thefirst
duty ofagovernmentisto providea


financialsafety netforalldisadvantaged persons,andthatincludesthosewithout
work.


Sample 158


StudyingtheEnglishlanguageinanEnglish-speakingcountryisthebestbutnot
theonlywaytolearnlanguage.
Do youagreeordisagreewiththisstatement?


Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.

Youshouldspendabout 40 minutes onthistask.

modelanswer:


Studyingalanguageinacountrywhereitiswidelyspoken hasmanyadvantages.Itis,
therefore,agoodideatostudyEnglishinacountrysuchasBritain.However, I believe
itisnottheonlywaytolearnthelanguage.
Inthefirstplace,moststudentsin non-English-speakingcountrieslearnEnglishat
secondaryschool,andsometimesat university nowadays.Althoughtheirspoken
Englishisnotusually ofavery highstandard,theirknowledgeof grammarisoften
quiteadvanced.Thisiscertainly usefulwhenstudentscometoanEnglish-speaking
countryto perfectthelanguage.
Secondly,studyingthebasicsofEnglishatsecondaryschoolislessstressfulthan


learningthelanguagewhileoverseas.Thisisbecausestudentslivingathomedo not
havetoworryaboutproblemssuchasfindingaccommodation, payingfortheirstudy
andlivingcosts,andtryingtosurviveinaforeigncountrywheredayto dayliving
causesmuchstress.
However,thereareobviousadvantagesoflearningEnglishinBritain.Every day

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