Best Practice Book for IELTS Writing

(Axel Boer) #1

DearMr.Peter,


Thank youforyourletterof 20 September.I was very saddenedby your account of
whathappenedin ourhotellastmonth,andI am writing to express my apologiesfor
this. I can understand that you were shockedby the way the receptionist
behaved.There canbe noexcusefor such


behaviourandIfully understandwhy youfelt you needed to complainabout the
situation.Ican providenoexplanationfor/ofthewaytheemployeespoketo you.


AsamemberofDariusHotelsGroup,we have a reputationfor being perfectat
lookingafterourcustomers,andIamverysorry that your experienceof our service
didnot confirm this.I intendto dealwithstaffmemberappropriatelyandIwillensure
thathedoesnotrepeatthisbehaviourby sending him on a retrainingcoursenext
week.Iwouldliketoassure youthatthebehaviouryouencounteredis nottypicalofour
staff.


As the guest service manager, Iamresponsiblefor all of our employees so
pleaseacceptmyapologiesagainandthis voucherworth$100tospendinanyofour
hotels.


Yourssincerely,JohnNorman


GuestServiceManager


Sample 3


Marinahasjuststarted anewcourseatcollegeandhertutorhasaskedherto
writehimalettertellinghimsomethingaboutherself.


Shehasmadetenmistakesinverbtensesinherletter.Find andcorrectthem.


DearTutor,


IamcomingtoBrightonCollegefromSingapore,whereIwasastudentforten years.I
didalreadytakeexaminationsinSingaporeinEnglish,Biology,ComputerandMaths.My
highestscoreisforComputer:IgotgradeA.


WhenIwasastudentinSingaporeIalso haveapart-timejobinashop.My uncle owns
asupermarketandsoIhelped himintheevenings.Iusedtoworkedtherefour nightsa
weekandIthinkthiswasvery goodexperienceforme.

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