Best Practice Book for IELTS Writing

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busorsubway,theymustknowthattheywillbeableto getto variousplacesontime.
Transportvehiclesmustbewellmaintained,subwayandbus driversshould be
customer-orientedandservicemustbepunctualandefficient.Thisisanadditional
importantstep.


Inconclusion,throughamulti-prongedapproach,itispossibletoincreasetheuse of
publictransportation.City officialsand politicianscanleadtheway by utilizingthese
formsoftransportthemselvesand bringingaboutchangethrough personal


example.Then,morecitizenswillfollowsuitandwemayallhopetolivein acleaner,
lesspollutedenvironment.


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Sample 168


Manypeoplebelievethatwomenmakebetterparentsthanmenandthatthisis
whytheyhavea greaterroleinraisingchildreninmostsocieties.Othersclaim
thatmenarejustasgoodaswomenatparenting. Writeanessayexpressing your
pointofview.Givereasonsfor youranswer.


Towhatextentdo youagreewiththisstatement?


Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.


Achildisborntotwo parents–amanandawoman.Bothsexesplayacrucialrolein
raisingthechild.Althoughfatherscanmakeexcellentparents,inmy opinion,mothers
areinreality betterparentsbased ontheirnaturalintuitionandcompassionate
tendencies.


Firstly,forawidevariety ofsocio-culturalreasons,womentendto havemoreintuitive
intelligencethanmen.Itisthisintuitionthatenablesthemotherto knowwhen herchild
needsher.Inaddition,women often knowhowtoread non-verbalsignalsin human
behavior,whichcanalertthemtoissuesand problemsinthechild’slife.Allofthese
“perceptiveskills”playamajorrolein


makingthemotheraclose,responsibleandresponsiveparent.


Secondly,mostmothersshareainimitable bondwiththeirchildren.Perhapsthisbond
arisesduringtheninemonthsof
pregnancy;perhapsitisreinforced
throughtheactofbreastfeeding.Whateverthecause,thereoftenappearsto bea
lifelongsilverchord orpsychicconnection betweenmotherandchild.Asaresult,the
motherisabletoevaluatethechild’sactionsfromtheviewpointofhis/herintentions,
and notjustresults.Thisempathyispricelessandcannoteasily bereplicated.Although
fathersmayform
deeploving bondswiththeirchildren,theymay notbeabletomatchthedepth of
closenessshared bymotherandchild.

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