Best Practice Book for IELTS Writing

(Axel Boer) #1

Ihavejustreturned homeafterspendingthreenightsatyourhotelinPaddington.The
staffwereveryfriendlyandthelocationwasextremelyconvenient.However,IfeelI
mustexpressmy disappointmentabouttheroom.


Asweallknow,Londonisexperiencinga verywarmsummerthisyear,with
temperatures around 30 °C last week,whichisquiteunusual.Asaresult,it was very
hotinmyroomonthesixthfloor.


Becauseoftheextremeheatintheroom, I had to leave the windows open all night
andsoit wasverynoisy,asthehotelisonamainroadandthetrafficneverstopsin
London.Consequently,Igotverylittlesleep overthethreenights.


Ithinkitwould beagoodideatoinstallanairconditioningsysteminthehotel.Thiscould
also beusedasaheatingsysteminthewinterandwouldcertainlymaketherooms
morecomfortable.PerhapsyouwouldconsidergivingmeadiscountifIcometo your
hotelagain.


Ilookforwardto hearingfromyou.Yoursfaithfully


Sample 41
Youhaverecentlyheardthatafriendof yourshashadsomeproblemsasaresult
ofsomeunusualweather. Writealetterto yourfriend.


Inyourletter


expressconcern (i.e. say you aresorrytohearwhathashappened)

tellthemaboutasimilarexperiencethatyouoncehad

givesomeadviceorofferhelp

Youshouldwriteatleast 80 words.

Al lowyourself 15 minutes for thistask.

modelanswer:

DearAnnaandLeo,


Wewereshockedto hearfromLaraaboutthe storm that hit your city recently and
the damage done to your house. Howawfultocomehomefromyourholidaytofind
theroofblown offthehouse!


Iunderstand howyoumustfeel,aswehadasimilarexperienceafewyearsagowhen
therewasasuddenelectricalstormhereinSydney.Icamehomefromworktofindthat

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