Best Practice Book for IELTS Writing

explainwhy youtookthejob

describethe problems that youexperienced

suggestwhat could be done aboutthem

modelanswer:

DearSir,

I have been a part-time fitness instructorin your gym for four months. I was
pleasedto beofferedthejob, notonly because I need to earn some extra moneyto
covermylivingexpensesbutalso becauseIneedsomeexperienseinfitnesstraining.

Ithasbeen obvioustomethatpeopleoften
need helpin usingthegymequipment.However, it seems that the othertrainers
havenotbeenencourageto offer assistance to club members. I offerasmuchasI
can, butthismeansthatIamconstantlyin demandandtherefore,working harderthan
anyoneelseinthe gym.Thissituationseemsratherunfair.

While I realise that members receiveinitialgyminstruction,Ifeelthattheyalso need
ongoing helpwiththeequipment.CouldIsuggestthataletterissenttotrainers
promotingthis?Afterall,personalattention ofthiskindmakespeoplefeel valuedand
mayresultinincreasedmembership.

Yoursfaithfully
Sample 44

AfriendhasaskedyoutobabysitonSaturday andwantstoknowhowmuch you
chargeperhourforthis.Unfortunately, youalreadyhaveacommitmentthis
weekendandcannothelp.However, youfreethefollowingweekend.

Writealetterto yourfriendexlainingthatyouarenotabletohelpthistime,but
couldhelplater.Explainalsowhat yourfeefortheserviceis.

Youshould write at least 150 words.

Youshouldspendabout 20 minutes onthistask.

Youdonot need towrite your own address.

modelanswer:

DearXX(nameofcolleague)