Best Practice Book for IELTS Writing

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Iamwritingthislettertoexplainwhy I havebeen unabletoreturnthethreebooks have
outonthree-dayloan,whicharenow overdue.


Aftertakingthebooksout on 16 thMarch,Ihadan urgentphonecallfrommyelderly
aunt'sneighbourtosaythatmyaunthad hadafalland had beentakeninto hospital.I
amheronlysurvivingrelativeinthiscountry,soIfeltIhadto goandseeher
immediately. I travelled down to Surreythefollowingmorning,thinkingIwouldstay
foronlytwo orthreedays.


Unfortunately, my aunt's condition has only improved veryslowly, so I have hadto
stay here longer than expected.However,thehospitalsaysthatifallgoeswell,she
should beableto go homeintwo orthreedays'time,inwhichcaseIwillbe backatthe
beginning ofnextweek.
DealinginmindthecircumstancesItrust youwillkindlywaiveanyfinesthatmay have
accumulated.
Yourssincerely


Sample 55


Youhavehadabankaccountforafew years.Recently youreceivedaletterfrom
thehankstatingthatyouraccountis$240 overdrawnandthat
you will he charged $70 which will he
takendirectlyfrom youraccount.Youknowthatthisinformationisincorrect.


Writealettertothebank.Explainwhathashappenedandsaywhatyouwouldlike
themtodo aboutit.


Youshould write at least 150 words.

Youshouldspendabout 20 minutes onthistask.

Youdo NOT need to write your ownaddress.

modelanswer:

DearSir,


I amwritinginreplytoaletterI received
from you a few days ago. In your letter you state that I am $240 overdrawn and
thatyouwillbechargingme$70.


IwouldliketopointoutthatthereasonIam overdrawn is because of a mistake
madeby yourbank.Ifyoulookthrough yourrecordsyouwillseethatIwroteseveral
weeksagoexplainingthesituation.Forthelasttwelvemonths,Ihavebeen paying $300
a month for a car I boughtlastsummer.Themonthly paymentsweretaken directly
frommy bankaccount.However, two months ago I sold the carandIwroteto you

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