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Sample 2


Writeaboutthefollowingtopic:

Somepeoplethinkwomenshouldbe allowed to join the army, the navy andthe
airforcejustlikemen.
To what extent do you agree ordisagree?
Givereasonsforyouranswer.Writeatleast 250 words.modelanswer:

Whether women should be allowed toserveinthemilitary hastriggeredspirited
debate.Someassertthatthestatusquoshould bechangedandwomenshould be
entitledtojointhearmedforces.Personally, I fundamentally agree withtheir
assertion-forthreereasons.

History hasshownthatwomenarefullycapableofperformingwellinthemilitary.
Historically,therewereahostofvaliantwomen soldiers whose achievementsreally
put their male counterparts toshame. One need only look at the classic
examplesof JoanofArcandMulantosee how exceptionally women could perform
onthebattlefield.Inmy observation,their determination,courageand dignity,tothis
day,arestillbeingadmired bymalesoldiersandciviliansalikethroughouttheworld.

Moreover,fromanenlightenedstandpoint,femalepatriotsshould begrantedtherightto
gotothefrontlinewhentheirmotherlandisinvolvedinawar.Admittedly, gender
inequality was a highlycontroversialissueinthetwentiethcentury.However, now
twelveyearsintothenewmillennium,womencanlearnandteach,workandsupervise,
voteand votedinmostcountriesjustlikemen.Inlightofthissweeping progressin
genderequality,thereisnosenseindenyingthemtheright
to defendtheirhomecountrywhenawar breaksout.

Insum, keepingmilitaryservicesoutof boundsofwomenintheinformationageis
unwarranted.Ihavebeenconvincedthatitisinthebestinterestofanationifwomen

Youshouldspendabout 40 minutesonthistask.

Writeaboutthefollowingtopic:

Machinetranslation(MT)isslower and
less accurate than human translation and there is no immediate or
predictable likelihood of machinestaking overthisrolefromhumans.
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