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Readthefollowingsampleanswer.Completetheanswerbyfillingthegaps
withaword orphrasefromthebox below.

Also because

Thefirst isFor

that

SecondlyFinally

In

conclusion

Example

since

suchas while Ontheotherhand

A further point isthat

In recent years the vast expansion ofinformation and communications

technology hasmadeteleworkingmuchmore practical. Although in many cases
officeworkerscould bemadegeographicallyindependentby usingmodems,faxesand
cellphones,fewcompaniesoremployeestakefulladvantageofthispossibility.

Thereareanumberofstrongargumentsinfavorofallowingworkerstoworkfrom home.
Firstly costs for employers would be reduced.................... businesses wouldrequire
lessofficespace,whichisoftensituated in the center of large cities.
....................,worker'sliveswould beimproved in a variety of ways.
....................,theywould notneedtotravelto gettowork,whichwould givethemmore
freetime.
...................., they could combine their
workwiththeirfamilylife,whichisamajoradvantageiftheyareparentsof young
children orthey haveold peopletolook after....................., traveling to a
centralized workplace also has a number of points in its favor..................... many
employeeswouldmissthesocialaspectofwork.................... seeing colleagues and
meeting customers.....................employerswould needto beabletotrust
their workers to work at a high standardandfinishtheirworkontime,....................
supervisingteleworkersisevenmorecomplicated than supervising workers inthe
sameoffice.

....................,workingfromhomemightinhibitteamworkandcreativeworkandso
perhapsso onlyreallysuitableforpeople doingroutineofficework.

...................., I believe that....................manyworkerswelcometheopportunityto
go outtowork, otherswouldfindthechance to work from home veryconvenient.
Wherepossible,Ithinkworkersshould beofferedthechoice, but notforcedtoworkfrom
homeunlesstheywishto.

Inrecentyearsthevastexpansion ofinformationandcommunicationstechnology has
madeteleworkingmuchmore practical. Although in many cases officeworkerscould