Best Practice Book for IELTS Writing

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anyrelevantexamplesfromyourown knowledgeorexperience.


Writeatleast 250 words.modelanswer:


Someyoung peoplefindthemselveswith verylittleleisuretime.Ibelievetherearetwo
maincausesofthissituation.Thefirstisparentalpressureandthesecondis
competitionforuniversity places.


Every parentwantstoseehisorherchild dowellinschooland go onto havea
successfulcareer.Thismeansthattheyexertpressureontheirchildrentospend hours
each daystudyingathome.Someeven arrange extra tuition for theirchildren. In
my own country, it is not


uncommonforyoung peopletospendanother three hours at small privateschools
aftertheirusualdayatstaleschoolis over. As a consequence, their leisuretimeis
extremelylimitedandthepressure onthemisconsiderable.


Thesecondcauseisrelatedtothehighereducationsystem.Each year,therearemany
timesmoreapplicantsto universitythanthereareuniversity places.Theresult ofthisis
thatonlythosestudentswith very high gradesmanageto obtainaplace.This
contributestothepressureonteenagerssincetheymustworklong hoursto haveany
chanceofsuccess.


Onesolutiontotheproblemisforparentsto bemadeawareoftheeffectsofthe
pressure they put on their children.


Schoolsshouldinformparentsthattoomuch pressurecanleadtoanxiety,stressand
depression. They should be shownwaysinwhichtheycan helptheirchildrenlead
morebalancedliveswithareasonableamountofleisuretime.


Another effective measure would be forthegovernmenttoinvestinthecreationof
moreuniversity places.Thiscould bedone byexpandingexisting universitiesorby
building newones.Thiswould havetheeffectofeasingcompetitionforplaces giving
teenagers some of their preciousfreelimeback.


( 296 words)
Sample 14


Youshouldspendabout 40 minutesonthistask.


Scientistsandthenewsmedia arepresenting ever more evidence ofclimate
change.Governmnetscannotbeexpectedtosolvethisproblem.Itisthe
responsibility ofindividualstochangetheir lifestyle to prevent furtherdamage.


Whatareyourviews?


Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.

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