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Givereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourown
knowledgeorexperience.


modelanswer:


Recentlyscientistsworriedaboutclimatechangehaveurged governmentstointroduce
measurestoreducethe greenhousegasemissionsthatareseenasitsmaincause.
Simoultaneouslty, politiciansandenvironmentalistshave urgedindividualstomake
changestotheirlifestyle. I shall argue that governmentsandindividualsshouldtake
joinresponsibilityforthisproblem.


Firstly,industryaccountsforalarge proportion of the greenhouse gasemissions,and
thiscan only becontrolled by governmentaction.Measurescould betakento
discouragepollution,suchaslimiting ortaxingtheuseoffossilfuels.Alternatively,
subsidies could be offered


toindustriestoclean uptheirproduction processes.Iftheseideaswereadopted, I
believethatbusinesseswouldregard pollutionasafinancialissue.


Secondly, only discussion between governmentscanensurethatsolutionsare
successful.TheKyotoagreement,forexample, tried to reach global agreement on
howtoaddresstheproblem.Withoutsuchco-operating,itseemstomethateffortsto
reducefuelconsumptionare unlikelyto beeffective.
However, nationalandinternational policieswillonlysecceedifindividualsalsochange
theirlifestyle.Forexample, peoplecouldthinkmorecarefullyabout howthey useenergy
intheirhomes.By usinglesselectricity,installingenergy-efficient light bulbs and
electrical


appliances, orinvestinginsolarpanels,individualscanmakearealdifference.


Inaddition,Ithinkindividualattitudestotransport need to change. Instead of
makingshorttipsbycar, peoplecouldchoosetowalk,cycle,ortakeabus.Sincecars
areamajorsourceoftheproblem,changing ourbehaviourinthisareawould havea
majorimpact.


Inconclusion,Iwouldmaintainthatonly acombination ofinternationalagreement,
national policies, and changes inindividualbehaviourwillsucceedin preventing
furtherdamagetotheenvironment.


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