Best Practice Book for IELTS Writing

(Axel Boer) #1

Forthisreasonallcigaretteadvertisingshouldbebanned.


Discuss.


Writeatleast 250 words.modelanswer:


Theissueofcigaretteadvertisingisanimportantone,especiallyinthiscountrywhere
somany youngadolescentssmoke.Oneofthemaincausesofthisproblemis peer
pressure.Anothercauseisadvertising,especiallyTVadvertising.Smoking,asweall
know,leadsto a numberofhealth problemssuchascancerand heartdisease.Many
peoplethinkthatcigaretteadvertisingshould notbebannedsincethiswouldlimitour
freechoiceinthismatter.Howeverthereisgrowingevidencethatthisseriousproblem
is getting outofcontrol.Letusexaminethefactsmoreclosely.


Themostimportantreasonwhycigaretteadvertisingshould bebannedisthatcigarette
isbadforourhealth.Smokingcauseslungcancerand heartdisease.Many peoplealso
sufferfromslowand painfuldeathfromadiseasecalledemphysema.
Anotherimportantreasonwhycigaretteadvertisingshould bebannedisthatitcoststhe
tax payermoney.Peoplewho becomesickfromsmoking haveto becaredforin
expensivehospitals.Inadditiontheirdeathsoftenresultsinfinancialproblemfortheir
families.Finallycigarettesmokingmayleadtoanotherproblemnamely drugaddiction.
Althoughthereisnotconclusiveevidencethatthisoften happens,manyexpertsinthis
areafeelthatthereisaconnection betweenthetwo.


Perhapsasolutiontothisproblemistheeducation ofyoungchildrenconcerningthe
dangersoftaking upthishabit.Also a heavytaxcould beplaced oncigarettesso
thatyoungsterswould notbeabletoaffordthem.Inanycase,itseemsbeyondany
reasonabledoubtthatcigaretteadvertisingshould bebanned.


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Sample 21


Youshouldspendabout 40 minutesonthistask.
Writeaboutthefollowingtopic:


Illiteracyhastraditionallybeenviewed aslargely athirdworldproblem.However
itisbecoming apparentthatin


countriessuchastheUSAand
Australia,illiteracyisontheincrease.


Discusspossiblecausesforthisanditseffectonsociety.
Writeatleast 250 words.


modelanswer:

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