Steven Pressfi
eld
Do Th
e Work!
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How Screenwriters Pitch When movie writers pitch a project, they keep it brief because studio executives’ attention spans are minimal. But they, the writers, want their presentation to have maximum impact and to deliver, in concise form, the feel and fl
avor of the film they seein their heads. One trick they use is to boil down their presentation to the following :^- A killer opening scene
2. Two major set pieces in the middle
3. A killer climax
4. A concise statement of the theme
In other words, they’re filling in the gaps. The major beats.We can do that, too. If we’re inventing Twitter, we start with What Are You Doing Now ?, the 140-character limit, and the Following. We fill in thegaps: the hashtag, the tiny URL, the re-tweet.If we’re writingThe Hangover, we kick offwith Losing Doug ,Searching for Doug , Finding Doug. Fill in the blanks: Stu mar-ries a stripper, Mike Tyson comes after his tiger, Mister Chowbrings the muscle.Any project or enterprise can be
broken down into beginning, middle,
and end. Fill in the gaps; then fi
ll in
the gaps between the gaps.
When we’ve got David Lean’s eight sequences, we’re home ex-cept for one thing :The actual work.
Cover the CanvasOne rule for fi
rst full working
draft
s: get them done ASAP.
Don’t worry about quality. Act, don’t reflect. Momentum iseverything.Get to THE END as if the devil
himself were breathing down your
neck and poking you in the butt
with his pitchfork.
Believe me, he is.