Writing Better English for ESL Learners

10. Juanita tasted the cake. The cake’s flavor was wonderful.


11. He bought a bouquet of roses. The color of the roses is deep red.


12. She gently petted the puppy. Its coat was soft and silky.


13. Laura met Mr. Cane. Mr. Cane’s relatives still live in England.


14. I covered the boiling pot. The smell of the boiling pot made me ill.


15. Jeff danced with the girls. The girls’ father was his boss.


16. In the mountains they encountered a hiker. The hiker’s face was unshaven
    and sweaty.


17. Do you know our brother’s friend? The mother of our brother’s friend
    owns the bank.


18. She loved the music. The sound of the music filled the air.


19. I saw Mr. Johnson while shopping at the mall. Mr. Johnson’s son is still ill.

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