On Quantitative Metre 351
Ou
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rdrie
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d|voi
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ce ̆s, whe ̆n|
We ̆whi
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spe ̆r|to ̆ge
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the ̆r,|
A
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re qui
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e ̆t|a ̆nd mea
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ni ̆ngle ̆ss|
A ̆swi
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nd|i ̆ndry
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gra
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ss|
O ̆rra
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ts’ fee
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t|o
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ve ̆r|bro
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ke ̆ngla
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ss|
I ̆nou
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rdry
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|ce
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lla ̆r,|
Sha
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pe wi ̆thou
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tfo
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rm,|sha
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de wi ̆thou
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t|co
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lou ̆r,|
Pa
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ra ̆ly
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sed fo
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rce,|ge
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stu ̆re wi ̆th|ou
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tmo
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tio ̆n.|
Or let us take a passage from Stephen Spender, —
O ̆hco
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mra
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des,|le ̆tno ̆ttho
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se|who
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fo
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llo ̆w|a
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fte ̆r|
—The ̆beau
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ti ̆fu ̆l|ge ̆ne ̆ra
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tio ̆n|tha ̆tsha ̆ll spri
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ng fro ̆m|ou
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rsi
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des —|
Le ̆tno ̆tthe ̆m|wo
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nde ̆r|ho
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wa
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fte ̆r|the ̆fai
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lu ̆re o ̆f|ba
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nks|
The ̆fai
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lu ̆re|o ̆fca ̆the
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dra ̆ls|a ̆nd the ̆de ̆cla
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red|i ̆nsa
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ni ̆ty ̆|o ̆fou
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rru
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le ̆rs,|
We ̆la
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cked|the ̆spri
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ng-li
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ke|re ̆sou
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rce ̆s|o ̆fthe ̆ti
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ge ̆r|
O ̆ro ̆fpla
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nts|who
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stri
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ke ou
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t|ne
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wroo
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ts to ̆|gu
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shi ̆ng wa
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te ̆rs.|
Bu ̆t throu
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gh|the ̆to
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rn do
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wn|po
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rtio ̆ns o ̆f|o
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ld fa
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bri ̆c|le ̆tthei
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re
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yes|
Wa
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tch the ̆a ̆d|mi
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ri ̆ng da
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wn|e ̆xplo
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de|li
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ke a ̆she
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ll|
A ̆rou
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nd u ̆s,|da
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zi ̆ng u ̆s|wi ̆th i ̆ts li
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ght|li
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ke sno
_
w.|
There is a rhythm there, but it is not sufficiently gathered
up or vivid and it is much more subdued than Eliot’s towards
the atony and flatness of ordinary prose rhythm. The last lines
of the quotation fromThe Hollow Mencouldbeusedtode-
scribe with a painful accuracy most of this ametric poetry. Some
kind of poetic shape is there but no realised and convincing
form; shade there is plenty, but colour — except perhaps blacks,