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year, in which Snyder takes his predilection for the
metonymic list to an extreme. The next section,
“Kali,” presents images of danger and evil that pro-
voke an uncharacteristic yearning for “the safe
place in a blanket burrow.” “This Tokyo” repre-
sents Snyder at his bleakest. The meditation is
opened and, more important, closed by the refrain
“Peace war religion revolution / will not help.” But
“Back” elaborates a more positive vision, notably
in “Through the Smoke Hole,” a poem based on
Hopi Indian cosmology. The kiva, a ceremonial
structure, serves as an analogue for Snyder’s own
vision of a multiworld universe, while the kiva rit-
uals for ensuring the continuity of community
through life and death offer structures for Snyder’s
own movement beyond, if not exclusive of, the vi-
sion of “Kali” and toward the real work of build-
ing community in his native place.
Regarding Wave, written under the influence
of his Japanese anarchist-visionary friends, sets
Snyder firmly on a new communitarian course, cel-
ebrating a countercultural hero’s version of family
values. The collection begins with a poem titled
“Wave,” a meditation that associates the words
waveandwife. The poem is a self-delighted un-
folding of what it means to have a wife: the word,
the woman, the “wyfman,” the erotic, spiritual ad-
venture that is “veiled; vibrating; vague”:
Ah, trembling spreading radiating wyf
racing zebra
catch me and fling me wide
To the dancing grain of things
of my mind!
The last phrase, “dancing grain of things / of my
mind,” nicely articulates the repetitions Snyder af-
firms as generated out of wyf, the repetition that oc-
curs at once in things and in the things of the mind.
An exuberant formalism, or in Charles Olson’s
phrase, representation “by the primitive-abstract,”
dominates the book. Many poems elaborate a ba-
sic perception of formal and spiritual correspon-
dences between different ontological planes. In
“Song of the Tangle” lovers who “sit all folded”
formally “repeat” the ancient temple and landscape
at the center of which they sit: “Two thigh hills
hold us at the fork / round mount center.” Both the
overgrown archaic temple and crotches of lovers
are forms for discovery: “the tangle of the thigh //
the brush / through which we push.” “Song of the
Slip,” a poem arranged with every line centered on
the page, proposes that the male’s lovemaking com-
pletes a physical and spiritual harmony: “seedprow
// moves in and makes home in the whole.” When
a son is born the poet stays home and discovers a

new center: “From dawn til late at night / making
a new world of ourselves / around this life.”
Such formal design may seem to displace pol-
itics, as if the intuition of correspondence was also
an intuition of a sufficient world. Thus, in “Every-
body Lying on their Stomachs, Head toward the
Candle, Reading, Sleeping, Drawing,” as the poet’s
household forms a circle whose “plank shutter” is
“set / Half-open on eternity,” the social world is
bypassed. But such intuitions of formal and spiri-
tual shapeliness, as partly realized in erotic, fam-
ily, and natural experience, provide the basis for a
militant politics and poetics that envision such har-
monies realized in society. Regarding Wavelays
groundwork for the overtly political verse of later
volumes. “Revolution in the Revolution in the Rev-
olution” displays its formal repetition in a revi-
sionary statement of political ideology:
If the capitalists and imperialists
are the exploiters, the masses are the workers.
and the party
is the communist.
If civilization
is the exploiter, the masses is nature.
and the party
is the poets.
If the abstract rational intellect
is the exploiter, the masses is the unconscious.
and the party
is the yogins.
& POWER
comes out of the seed-syllables of mantras.
This is a politics based on a kind of formalist logic—
the substitution of new elements within the same
formula. Mantras themselves are forms—more than
contents—that produce a kind of elementary power
through repetition. It is the kind of power that Sny-
der believes will drive political change.
In 1966 Snyder had bought with Allen Gins-
berg one hundred acres of land on the San Juan
Ridge near Nevada City in northern California. In
1970, with the help of a crew of ten, he built a home
for his family there, naming it Kitkitdizze after
some local vegetation. In “Buddhism and the Com-
ing Revolution,” an essay first written in 1961 and
collected in Earth House Hold, Snyder states: “The
mercy of the West has been social revolution; the
mercy of the East has been individual insight into
the basic self/void. We need both.” Kitkitdizze and
its region would be Snyder’s place to develop a
grounded Buddhism. Buddhism’s essential percep-
tion of emptiness, its aim to look into the nature of
things without prejudice, would be put to the ser-
vice of a local, ecological politics informed by a
planetary perspective.

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