Business English for Success

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Notice how the paragraph incorporates the student’s personal judgment within the
evaluation. Evaluating a document requires prior knowledge that is often based on
additional research.


Tip


When reviewing directions for assignments, look for the verbs summarize, analyze,
synthesize, or evaluate. Instructors often use these words to clearly indicate the
assignment’s purpose. These words will cue you on how to complete the assignment
because you will know its exact purpose.


Exercise 1


Read the following paragraphs about four films and then identify the purpose of each
paragraph.



  1. This film could easily have been cut down to less than two hours. By the final scene, I
    noticed that most of my fellow moviegoers were snoozing in their seats and were barely
    paying attention to what was happening on screen. Although the director sticks diligently
    to the book, he tries too hard to cram in all the action, which is just too ambitious for
    such a detail-oriented story. If you want my advice, read the book and give the movie a
    miss.

  2. During the opening scene, we learn that the character Laura is adopted and that she has
    spent the past three years desperately trying to track down her real parents. Having
    exhausted all the usual options—adoption agencies, online searches, family trees, and so
    on—she is on the verge of giving up when she meets a stranger on a bus. The chance
    encounter leads to a complicated chain of events that ultimately result in Laura getting
    her lifelong wish. But is it really what she wants? Throughout the rest of the film, Laura
    discovers that sometimes the past is best left where it belongs.

  3. To create the feeling of being gripped in a vice, the director, May Lee, uses a variety of
    elements to gradually increase the tension. The creepy, haunting melody that subtly
    enhances the earlier scenes becomes ever more insistent, rising to a disturbing crescendo
    toward the end of the movie. The desperation of the actors, combined with the
    claustrophobic atmosphere and tight camera angles create a realistic firestorm, from
    which there is little hope of escape. Walking out of the theater at the end feels like
    staggering out of a Roman dungeon.

  4. The scene in which Campbell and his fellow prisoners assist the guards in shutting down
    the riot immediately strikes the viewer as unrealistic. Based on the recent reports on
    prison riots in both Detroit and California, it seems highly unlikely that a posse of
    hardened criminals will intentionally help their captors at the risk of inciting future
    revenge from other inmates. Instead, both news reports and psychological studies
    indicate that prisoners who do not actively participate in a riot will go back to their cells
    and avoid conflict altogether. Examples of this lack of attention to detail occur
    throughout the film, making it almost unbearable to watch.


Collaboration


Share with a classmate and compare your answers.

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