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Here are the notes that Mariah wrote to herself to characterize her purpose and
audience.
Mariah chose to begin by writing a quick introduction based on her thesis statement.
She knew that she would want to improve her introduction significantly when she
revised. Right now, she just wanted to give herself a starting point. You will read her
introduction again in Section 7.4 "Revising and Editing" when she revises it.
Tip
Remember Mariah’s other options. She could have started directly with any of the body
paragraphs.
You will learn more about writing attention-getting introductions and effective
conclusions in Chapter 8 "Writing Essays: From Start to Finish".
With her thesis statement and her purpose and audience notes in front of her, Mariah
then looked at her sentence outline. She chose to use that outline because it includes the
topic sentences. The following is the portion of her outline for the first body paragraph.
The roman numeral II identifies the topic sentence for the paragraph, capital letters
indicate supporting details, and arabic numerals label subpoints.