Poetry for Students Vol. 10

(Martin Jones) #1

14 Poetry for Students


The decade of the 1960s could have been a
time for celebration. The United States could have
seized upon the opportunity to commemorate the
one-hundredth anniversary of the end of the Civil
War and the Constitutional amendment that ended
slavery. Instead the hundred years after the end of
the Civil War was marked, or marred, by Jim Crow
Laws and violence.

Naomi Madgett’s choice of the word “centen-
nial,” with its celebratory connotation, as her
poem’s title presents a paradox. This paradox
forces readers to identify her meaning and to scru-
tinize a poem they may otherwise skim because
they’ve heard the story many times. Madgett con-
tinues to employ incongruity in the poem’s mes-
sage. This is a poem about a movement: in this
case, the Civil Rights movement. The very word
“movement” presents a paradox. Movement is not
limited to a single direction, is often incremental
rather than continuous, and is often deceptive.
Likewise, the hundred-year pursuit of freedom
from color prejudice moves forward as well as
backward, and it also stops. Additionally, move-
ment toward justice is deceptive. It cannot be seen
as it happens, but only as one looks back at a land-
mark and measures the distance traveled.

So it is with movement, or change, in society.
Madgett mimics society’s erratic and sometimes
imperceptible pace of change in this poem. Because
it is free verse, the poem does not conform to a
standard meter, which is one of the ways in which
a poet achieves movement in a poem. The poem’s
free verse form contains no intentional rhyme. If
Madgett had used end rhyme, her readers would
have moved quickly through the poem, perhaps
pausing momentarily at the end of a couplet or qua-
train, but then hurrying on toward the completion
of the next rhyme. Perhaps the strongest sense of
movement in poetry is accomplished with internal
rhyme, a device which Madgett used along with
end rhyme to great effect in her poem “Midway”:
“I’m coming and I’m going / And I’m stretching

and I’m growing / And I’ll reap what I’ve been
sowing or my skin’s not black.”

“Alabama Centennial” is devoid of rhyme and
rhythm, and perhaps intentionally so. This poem
moves as justice moves: with stops and starts, fits
and jerks. Its appearance on the page is jagged and
irregular with lines of varying length, many of
which are interrupted with punctuation marks. The
lack of regular pace is fitting. When the word pace
is applied to a liberation movement, an oxymoron
is created. A liberation movement has no real pace,
only a perceived pace, which for the oppressed is
always too slow, for the oppressors is unacceptable,
and for the fearful fringes is too fast.

While it lacks recognizable pace, the poem
manages to elicit a feeling of urgency. However,
this is not the result of standard poetic devices, but
the result of punctuation and sentence length. The
exclamations—“Never!” and “Walk!” and “Now!”
are shouts of urgency. They are also, as single-word
utterances, indicative of commands that demand
immediate response. The use of these commands
and the actions they elicit produce more than a feel-
ing of exigency, they also contribute to the poem’s
underlying irony. In line 10 “a new wind blew, and
a new voice / rode its wings with quiet urgency.”
Only after a single voice called out for freedom did
other voices join the cry, and they joined as echoes.
This image presents a sad irony.

The tragic legacy of the oppressed is that they
are often so scarred by captivity that they evolve
into a group without a voice, and sometimes with-
out a vision. When a strong voice does rise, as one
did with Reverend King, the voices of the op-
pressed masses, when they finally join in, are raised
as echoes—almost as involuntary responses. The
voices that joined the Civil Rights movement
joined, it seems in this poem, in response to orders,
as their ancestors had done for centuries. “Walk!”
the voice said, “And I walked the streets of Mont-
gomery,” and later, “Ride! And I rode the bus for
freedom.” This is in truth sad irony, for one hun-
dred years after the Civil War no black person
should have been testing the waters of freedom for
the first time. No black person should have still
been waiting for an order to exercise an inalienable
right. Fortunately, as was the case with Dr. King,
directives sometimes issue from a beneficent
source, and following them allows the dependent
to move toward independence. Yet oppression per-
sists. It persists for persons of color, persons of
creed, persons of sexuality, persons of age, persons

Alabama Centennial

This poem moves as
justice moves: with stops
and starts, fits and jerks.”
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