british poetry in the age of modernism

(Axel Boer) #1
Only the cricket whistling
While the dewdrops fall,
So I know not who came knocking,
At all, at all, at all.

The poem is a collection of tiny noises heard instead of a sound half-
heard. Expecting something or someone and not being satisfied, all one’s
faculties are left straining to hear, so they pick up the perpetual, minute
sounds usually drowned by people’s busy presence. The whole poem is
full of tiny repetitions that mimic the repetition of a door-knock rhythm



  • ‘at all, at all, at all’, ‘sure – sure – sure’, ‘tap-tapping’ – or sounds that
    echo one another. ‘I listened...Ilooked to left’, ‘stirring in the still’,
    ‘busy beetle’, ‘whistling while’, ‘dewdrops’ and so on. ‘Whistle’ mimics
    the cricket, and ‘screech-owl’ is a double onomatopoeia. This doubling
    of sense and sound is not so much poetic reinforcement of a prior
    message as making the word-choice motivated by the same anxiety that
    drives the poem, compelled to repeat ‘sure-sure-sure’ by the hope or fear
    of the unheard knock, and the heart-in-mouth attention to the sounds of
    the forest, and in doing so, it only makes the absence of the actual sound
    more palpable. This scenario of an engrossing absence is one to which de
    la Mare’s poems return obsessively. Watching someone absorbed or
    asleep (‘Old Susan’, ‘Miss Loo’, ‘The Tailor’, ‘Martha’, ‘The Sleeper’,
    ‘All That’s Past’), pondering the perpetually absent dead (‘Never More,
    Sailor’, ‘When the Rose is Faded’, ‘The Stranger’, ‘Where?’), or the
    stillness of an empty house (‘Alone’, ‘The Dark Chateau’, ‘The Listen-
    ers’, ‘Time Passes’), the poems’ speakers, listeners or dreamers are
    confronted by an absence that is not merely a fact, but seems to await
    and precede them, so that they are thrown into the situation of ‘Silence’
    itself:


Unmoved it broods, this all-encompassing hush
Of one who stooping near,
No smallest stir will make
Our fear to wake;
But yet intent
Upon some mystery bent
Hearkens the lightest word we say, or hear.

The verse-form allows silence to press in upon its shortened middle
lines, and the final, deliberate comma lets it seep in so that readers can
hear that what they have been reading about is suddenly present, listening
to them – and has been since the poem was begun. Unlike simply not


120 British Poetry in the Age of Modernism

Free download pdf