The Writing Experiment by Hazel Smith

(Jos van der Sman) #1

exercises



  1. Rewrite the same passage in a number of different ways using
    various types of narrators who are both inside and outside the
    story (these are known as homodiegetic and heterodiegetic
    narrators respectively). Experiment also with metafictional,
    overt and covert narrators. Consider the way in which different
    kinds of narration affect the dynamics of power, both within the
    narrative and between narrator and reader.

  2. Write a piece which emphasises the relationship between the
    narrator (the person who is telling the story) and the narratee
    (the person to whom the story is being told).

  3. Write two short narrative passages: one in which the gram-
    matical position of the subject is fixed and one in which it is
    unsettled.

  4. Write a short piece which illustrates narrative foreshadowing.

  5. Create a text which includes non-narrated elements: i.e. incor-
    porates passages in which the narrator is absent.

  6. Build a point of view (focalisation) using the triggers sensing,
    feeling and thinking.

  7. Create a point of view which alternates between exterior action
    and internal thought.

  8. Write about the same incident from two or three completely
    different points of view or focalisations. Use this as a means to
    explore different forms of subjectivity and divergent cultural
    viewpoints.

  9. Write a text which restructures the narrative and moves
    between different points in the past and the present. Consider, if
    relevant, how the structure of your piece relates to the opera-
    tions of memory.


ENTER NARRATOLOGY, ENTER POWER


You can learn a great deal about shaping narratives from acquainting
yourself with narratology. Narratology is a theory of narrative, and was an
outgrowth of structuralism: it is an analytical system for understanding
narrative structure. Narratologists break down the macrostructure of nar-
rative form into its micro-elements. Narratology challenges traditional
formulations of narrative as a plot with characters. Instead it breaks down


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