The Writing Experiment by Hazel Smith

Example 8.l8

frame de frame

rule de rule

unnegotiable shape

soft to chopstick

‘Tofu Your Life’ (Huang 1996, p. 29)

Example 8.19

Jouissance

That I said you could not

Imperative of first Principles

Narratological sequence of plethora

You didn’t know the big bear

You didn’t know the texture of woven fibre

You didn’t sand b/w your toes

It didn’t start there

of events a sequence

mona

mona

mona mona mona mona

mona mona mona mona mona mona

mona

mona

monamonamona

Andy where are I?

That’s the condition

Post-

your life

a small

square tofu

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