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nized, local, sustainable food. The company, Growing Com-
munities, uses organic box gardens and small farms to supply
more than 400 homes with weekly deliveries of organic fruits
and vegetables. After a ten-year investment in local farmers
and mini-gardens within the city, Growing Communities is now
financially independent and generates over $400,000 per year
(Willis 53). Compelled by both capitalism and social concern,
Brown’s efforts have shown that community-supported agricul-
ture not only is possible but can be profitable as well! Our own
community agriculture program should not be an entrepreneurial
endeavor, but Brown’s work in London indicates that it need not
be a financial burden to the city either. Rather, the co-op would
be financially self-sufficient, with the potential to generate rev-
enues and fiscal growth in the city.
There are environmental factors that make South Bend
an even better place to launch a profitable community agricul-
ture program than London. Chiefly, South Bend has many more
farms in the immediate vicinity than Ms. Brown could ever have
dreamed of in the U.K. While Brown was limited to twenty-five
local farms within 100 miles of the city, South Bend has over fifty
farms within 25 miles of LaSalle Square (Local Harvest). Offering
a broader production base creates more potential for profits by
decreasing transportation time and increasing product, thereby
making it easier for a coalition to become financially self-
sufficient in a shorter time frame than Ms. Brown’s ten-year plan.
Urban Philadelphia has led the way in demonstrating
the profitability of community solutions to food insecurity
through an offshoot of the Pennsylvania Horticultural Society
(PHS) known as Philadelphia Greens. Since the 1970s, this
coalition has reclaimed parks, planted trees, and created com-
munity gardens, both to revitalize the neighborhood and to
serve the nutritionally and economically poor. Through a process
that plants trees, builds wooden fences, and gardens the more
than 1,000 vacant lots of Philadelphia, PHS combines housing
projects and reclaimed space to “green” and reinvigorate the
neighborhood (“The Effects”). Since LaSalle Square is essen-
tially a large empty grassy area at the moment, a community
agricultural co-op should turn this vacant lot and others in

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