Skink
This photo has been sent to us by
Sunder Sam through email. Since
there was no mention of what the
picture is for, I assume Sunder
wanted me to critique the picture.
The subject is interesting. Since the
subject was in low light, Sunder has
done well in selecting a high ISO,
which also allowed him a reasonably
fast shutter speed to avoid camera
movement during exposure.
Though opinions may differ, I
personally do not like any fuzzy
areas in front of the main subject;
I find that disturbing. I also notice
what appears to be a part of a tail,
adjacent to the skink. I find that too,
disturbing. It is possible that there
could have been another skink above,
whose tail we see in the original
Camera: Canon EOS 600D;
Lens: 55-250mm
Aperture: F/6.3;
Shutter speed: 1/320sec; ISO: 2000
Edited
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picture. I also notice some highlights
in the dark area behind the critter,
which somewhat draws my attention
away from the main subject.
So, what would I have done if I were
you? I think I would have tried using
a narrower aperture which could
have reduced some fuzziness in
the foreground, though that would
have reduced the shutter speed and
increased the chances for camera
movement during the exposure.
Also, I would have used a shorter
focal length on the zoom lens, may be
around 180mm instead of 250mm.
Though that would have resulted in a
smaller image on the camera sensor,
the depth of field would have been
greater, possibly reducing the amount
of blur in the foreground.
In the edited image, I have cropped
the image. The subject now stands out
better. I also toned down the out of focus
areas and cloned out the disturbing tail.
A naturalist may not like the idea of
getting rid of the tail, but I am looking at
it from a different angle! |SP
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