Example 1:
My mother’s salary is higher than Jane’s mother.
Your mother’s salary is higher than Jane’s mother’s salary, not higher than
Jane’s mother. How could a salary be higher than a person?
Correct: My mother’s salary is higher than Jane’s mother’s.
Example 2:
Harry raised more cows than Jim’s ranch.
This above sentence is comparing Harry with Jim’s ranch. The writer of the
sentence should instead compare Harry with Jim. That would be more logical.
Correct: Harry raised more cows than Jim did.
BONUS COMMANDMENT: THOU SHALT ALSO WATCH OUT FOR THESE ASSORTED
ERRORS.
• Either goes with or; neither goes with nor.
• When referring to a country, don’t use they; use it.
Example:
The United States is the richest country in the world. They have the highest
GNP.
Correct: It has the highest GNP.
• Use the word fewer if you can count what you’re describing; if not, use the
word less.*
*I got fewer points on my SAT because I knew less of the information in this helpful book.
—Samantha
Example:
Now that there are fewer elephants milling around, there is less dust being
kicked into the air.
A Punctuation Refresher