270 / SPEAKING AND WRITING
In focus
THE RIGHT ORDER
A poorly organized letter reads like
a mystery story. Clue by clue, it
unfolds details that make sense
only toward the end—if the reader
gets that far. Your job is to make it
easier for the reader, by explaining
each point with an overview,
followed by details. To avoid
any confusion, always give
directions before reasons, requests
before justifications, answers before
explanations, conclusions
before details, and solutions before
problems. Try the approach used in
newspaper articles. They start with
the most important information and
taper off to the least important.
Making your writing come alive
To escape from outdated, excessively formal
writing styles, try to make your writing more like
your speaking, and then ”tidy it up.” Imagine your
reader is in front of you and aim all the time for
writing that is clear, fresh, and easy to read. You may
need to write a first draft for structural purposes,
and then go back over your document.
VIGOROUS AND
DIRECT
Use active
sentences and
avoid the passive
voice. Be more
definite by limiting
the use of the
word “not.”
Make sure that your writing is:
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